Hi Mayris! Here are some corrections c:

have done a good job to this point in my life --> have done a good job so far ("up until this point" would also work, but it sounds like you've been doing a good job and now you've messed up c':)

I hace obtained good results in both my academic and professional life. In this sense. I think that I have archived some sucess

Just some typos here --> hace - have; archived - achieved; sucess - success

Great use of vocabulary overall, though! Hope this helps, and best of luck! :D