Magical stars.
How often do you watch the stars? I think you do it seldom, very seldom. Peoples sit at their home after work. They don’t want go for a walk at night, maybe because it’s dangerous or because people are too lazy. Sometimes we can’t see the stars because of air pollution, but you can go outside of a town and see a beautiful view. There is another world, just look up. Giant fireballs hang in infinite space. It’s magical.
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Magical stars.
How often do you watch the stars? I think you do it seldom, very seldom. People sit at home after work. They don’t want to go for a walk at night, maybe because it’s dangerous or because they are too lazy. Sometimes we can’t see the stars because of air pollution, but you can go outside of a town you can see a beautiful view. There is another world, just look up. Giant fireballs hang in infinite space. It’s magical.Very well written and poetic!
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Magical stars.
How often do you watch look at the stars? I think you do it seldom, very seldom. Peoples sit at in their homes after work. They don’t want go for a walk at night, maybe because it’s dangerous or because people are too lazy. Sometimes we can’t see the stars because of air pollution, but you can go outside of a town and see a beautiful view. There is another world, just look up. Giant fireballs hang in infinite space. It’s magical.I agree. A good view of a starry sky is amazing.
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Well, where i live, I can see them pretty good! I live in a mall town not too much light around here. My dad always encouraged us to enjoy the beautiful starry sky. He even bought us a star guide book when we were kids haha!
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Very good text.
Instead of watch the stars you could use simply "stagaze" it's a nice word. Also you could think about changing "hang" to suspended.
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Magical sStars.
How often do you watch look at the stars? I think you do it seldom, very seldom. Peoples sit at in their homes after work. They don’t want to go for a walk at night, maybe because it’s dangerous or because people they are too lazy. Sometimes we can’t see the stars because of air pollution, but you can go outside of a town and see a beautiful view. There is another world, just look up. Giant fireballs hang in infinite space. It’s magical.You're welcome.
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