First Day on italki
Today is my first day writing composition on italki,though I have registered for about two weeks.
I'd like to talk about my first job after my graduation.It surprised me that my new colleagues is so kind.There are seven girls and twenty boys in my department.The girls here are all beautiful and lovely and we became good friends now.
Three hours later,I will have a presentation infront of my boss .Its the mid-term performance assessment of my first job.However,I do not feel any nervous at all.Because I think I am ready for it.
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First Day on italki
Today is my first day writing a composition on italki, though I have been registered for about two weeks.I'd like to talk about my first job after my graduation. It surprised me that my new colleagues are so kind.There are seven girls and twenty boys in my department.The girls here are all beautiful and lovely and we became good friends now.
Three hours from now, I will have a presentation in front of my boss .It's the mid-term performance assessment of my first job .However,I do not feel any nervous at all, because I think I am ready for it.
"later" needs to follow some specific event. E.g. "I went to work. Three hours later, I went to lunch".
"because" isn't usually used at the start of a sentence.
Welcome to iTalki! I hope you will find it useful. I'm fairly new here too. I usually use the site Lang-8.com, but I don't think it will last much longer, the admins have abandoned it, so I am checking out other language sites!
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The prssentation is finished,but I feel a little complicated.
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