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Dear Violetta,
Thank you very much for your letter. I am so sorry that i have not been in touch for so long. That's because i was on the '' family journey'' . Unfortunately, this summer was very boring. And this '' family river rafting'' was the only one interesting thing. Ural's nature is magnificent and breathtaking. So the river rafting is one of the most favourite type of trip of Ural's people. It is short and cheap, bur really usefull decision. You and your friend or relatives survial in the wild nature. It's uncomfortable and scary, but it's makes us closer to each other. So i advise you to try this thing.
I'm sorry I need to go now, because i must wash the dishes, before my mother came.
See you soon
Ann
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hi. could you help me with my homework?)
Dear Violetta,Thank you very much for your letter. I am sorry that I have not been in touch for so long. That's because I was on the ''family journey'' . Unfortunately, this summer was very boring and this ''family river rafting'' was the only interesting thing. Nature in the Ural's is magnificent and breathtaking and the river rafting is one of the most favourite types of trip with the locals. It is short and cheap, bur really a useful choice. You and your friends or relatives must survive in the wilds. It's uncomfortable and scary, but it's makes us closer to each other so I advise you to try it. I'm sorry but I need to go now because I must wash the dishes before my mother comes. See you soon
Ann
Very well written!
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