My shelf was broken.
My shelf was broken.
My shelf was broken at midnight two weeks ago.
I thought that I heard something at midnight, but I didn't confirm it because I was so scared.
My husband was on business trip, so I was alone.
And then I found out it in next morning.
The shelf's leg was broken and the shelf fell forward.
My living room was mess.
Books was fallen, cups and saucer was broken, my digital camera was fallen.
Fortunately, the shelf can be repaired because it is Scandinavian antique furniture.
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My shelf was broken. -> My Shelf Broke.
My shelf was broken. -> My shelf broke.My shelf was broken at midnight two weeks ago. -> My shelf broke at midnight two weeks ago.
I thought that I heard something at midnight, but I didn't confirm it because I was so scared. -> I thought I heard something at midnight, but I didn't go to see because I was so scared.
My husband was on business trip, so I was alone. -> My husband was away on a business trip, so I was alone.
And then I found out it in next morning. -> And then I found it the next morning.
The shelf's leg was broken and the shelf fell forward. -> The shelf's leg broke, and the shelf fell forward.
My living room was mess. -> My living room was a mess.
Books was fallen, cups and saucer was broken, my digital camera was fallen. -> Books and my digital camera had fallen, cups and saucers were broken.
Fortunately, the shelf can be repaired because it is Scandinavian antique furniture. -> Fortunately, the shelf can be repaired because it's an antique piece of Scandinavian furniture.
*Oh no! How scary! I'm glad it was just a shelf and that it can be fixed. :)
**Notice that I changed a lot of the 'was Verb-en'. This is because 'was broken' etc implies someone broke the stuff. But no one did; it was just an accident.
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