Diary_01
Today I wake up at 4 a.m. because I slept about 9 p.m. yesterday. There is one thing I always want to do which is swimming in the morning! So I decided to do this in this opportunity. I knew swimming pool opened around 6 a.m., and arrived 5:50. It’s so surprise at seeing many people waiting pool open, mostly elders. I paid 100 fee into the pool, then I found out I forget take my swimming cap. I had to ask stuff whether they can borrow a swimming cap, fortunately, there was yellow one which I can use. It was my first time to swimming in the morning, I felt so fresh and exciting. Unfortunately, I didn’t expect to 4 people use one lane in pool.
And one of them was very slow, we had to wait or surpass her. However it was a amazing experience~ I think I will do it again soon.
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Diary_01
Today I woke up at 4 a.m. because I had slept at 9 p.m, yesterday. There is one thing I wanted to do something which is swimming in the morning! So I decided to do this in this opportunity. I knew that the swimming pool open around 6 a.m., and I arrived at 5:50. It’s so surprised to see many people waiting for opening the pool, mostly elders. I paid 100 fee to enter the pool, then I found out I had forgotten to take my swimming cap. I asked stuff whether they can borrow a swimming cap, fortunately, there was a yellow one which I can use. It was my first time to swim in the morning, I felt so fresh and excited. Unfortunately, I didn’t expect to 4 people using one lane in the poolAnd one of them was very slow, we had to wait or surpass her. However it was an amazing experience~ I think I will do it again soon.
good job . you didn’t make alot of mistakes . you had only few mistakes in grammer.
nice topic . continue learning more languages.
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