NewYork I'm sure that this is one of the most famous and visited city in the world. Although is always crowed of people i was able to find places that gave to me relax and peace. I remember when i cou

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NewYork I'm sure that this is one of the most famous and visited city in the world. Although is always crowed of people i was able to find places that gave to me relax and peace. I remember when i could visit the Empire State Building and the Top of The Rock, on the top of those buildings you can breath, close your eyes and everything beside you it is not noisy anymore. When you look down you don't listen even the horn of the cars. In addition the Highline is another place with plants and busches where there is a beautiful view. Not to mention the spectacular Central park, the big lung where i could discovered special plants, waterfall and little lake. It's huge and i decided to ride it with a bycicle. Inside people are playing basketball or students enjoy reading a book. I appreciated the citizens, helpful and gentle. Through the Hudson river i arrived to the glory Statue of Liberty, not very high but when i was there my eyes were fix and shining. NewYork is not difficult to navigate therefore i walked more than four mile everyday between avenue and streets. The Memorial 9/11 is very sad and i saw people still crying listening the stories of the volunteers. Inside memories and finds of that tragedy remind me on that day when i was twenty years old. They said that this city never sleep and after one week there i agree. During the night the light are impressive and Times Square seems to be unreal. I could visited The American History and the Met. I have no words to descibe those museum. I was lucky because i did everything i planned in my mind. It was amazing and i can't believe that i really see and touch with my feet NewYork city, one of the most unbeliavable city in the world.

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NewYork

I'm sure that this is one of the most famous and visited cities in the world. Although it's always crowed with people, I was able to find places that gave me relaxation and peace. I remember when I visited the Empire State Building and the Top of The Rock. On the top of those buildings you can breath, close your eyes and everything beside you is not noisy anymore. When you look down you don't even hear the horns of the cars. In addition, the Highline is another place with plants and bushes where there is a beautiful view. Not to mention the spectacular Central park, the big lung where I discovered special plants, a waterfall and a little lake. It's huge and I decided to ride through it on a bicycle . Inside there are people playing basketball or students enjoying reading a book. I appreciated the citizens, they are helpful and gentle. On the Hudson river I arrived to the glory Statue of Liberty, which is not very high, but when I was there my eyes were fixed and shining. NewYork is not difficult to navigate, therefore I walked more than four miles everyday between avenues and streets. The 9/11 Memorial is very sad and I saw people still crying listening the stories of the volunteers. Inside the memories and artifacts of that tragedy remind me of that day when I was twenty years old. They said that this city never sleeps and after one week there I agree. During the night the lights are impressive and Times Square seems to be unreal. I was able to visit The American History Museum and the Met. I have no words to describe those museums. I was lucky because I did everything I planned in my mind. It was amazing and I an't believe that I have really seen and my feet have actually touched the ground in NewYork city, one of the most unbelievable cities in the world.

NewYork

I'm sure that this is one of the most famous and visited cities in the world. Although it is always crowded, I was able to find places that gave me a sense of relaxation and peace. I remember when I had the chance to visit the Empire State Building and the Top of The Rock, on the top of those buildings you can breath, close your eyes and everything around you seems not so noisy anymore. When you look down you don't even hear the cars honking. Moreover, the Highline is another place with plants and bushes where there is a beautiful view. Not to mention the spectacular Central park, the big lung where I had the chance to discover special plants, a waterfall and a little lake. It's huge and I decided to ride it with a bycicle. Inside, people are playing basketball or students enjoy reading a book. I appreciated the citizens, helpful and gentle. Through the Hudson river I arrived to the glorious Statue of Liberty, not very high but when I got there my eyes were fixed and shining. NewYork is not difficult to navigate therefore I walked more than four miles everyday between avenues and streets. The Memorial 9/11 is very sad and I saw people still crying listening to the volunteers' stories. Inside memories and finds of that tragedy remind me of that day when I was twenty years old. They say that this city never sleeps and after one week there I agree. During the night the lights are impressive and Times Square seems to be unreal. I visited The American History and the Met. I have no words to describe those museums. I was lucky because I did everything I planned. It was amazing and I can't believe that I really saw and touched with my feet NewYork city, one of the most unbeliavable cities in the world.

Hello,

This would be my correction to your text. I am not a native English speaker, but I did studied it very well in the past few years. If any native speaker has something more to add, I would also be grateful because all our lives we get to learn stuff, right? :)

All the best!

NewYork

I'm sure that this is one of the most famous and visited cities in the world. Although it is always crowded with people I was able to find places that gave me peace and relaxation. I remember when I visited the Empire State Building and the Top of The Rock. On top of those buildings you can breath, close your eyes and everything around you is not noisy anymore. When you look down, you can't even hear the horns of the cars. In addition, the Highline is another place with plants and bushes where there is a beautiful view. Not to mention the spectacular Central park, where I discovered special plants, a waterfall and a little lake. It's huge and I decided to ride around it on a bicycle. Inside people were playing basketball or students enjoyed reading a book. I appreciated the citizens who were helpful and gentle. Through the Hudson river I arrived at the glorious Statue of Liberty. It is not very high but when I was there my eyes were fixed and shining. New York is not difficult to navigate, therefore I walked more than four miles everyday between avenues and streets. The Memorial for 9/11 is very sad and I saw people still crying, listening to the stories of the volunteers. Inside, memories and findings of the tragedy reminded me of that day when I was twenty years old. They said that this city never sleeps and after one week there I agreed. During the night the lights are impressive and Times Square seems to be unreal. I visited The American History and the Met. I have no words to descibe those museums. I was lucky because I did everything I had planned in my mind. It was amazing and I can't believe that I really saw and touched with my feet New York City, one of the most unbeliavable cities in the world.

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