Complain- IELTS Exercise
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my annoying about some adolescents behavior in my neighborhood.
The adolescents allow their dogs run widely in public street which causing dangerous for our families.yesterday, I am sorry to tell you that one of this dogs attacked my niece during her way to the supermarket. She is thirteen years old. The dog followed her and she run a way till one of neighbors hit the dog by stone.
This behavior from adolescents made our neighborhood unsafe for our children. Most of the dogs are big and vicious.
Perhaps, it would be useful to arrest the dogs by police. The police should get pledging from the dangerous dogs owners to keep it away from public streets.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Hasan Ali
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Complain- IELTS Exercise
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing danger.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my annoyance about some adolescents behavior in my neighborhood.
The adolescents allow their dogs to run widely in public streets which causing danger for our families. Yesterday, I am sorry to tell you that yesterday one of this dogs attacked my niece during on her way to the supermarket. She is thirteen years old. The dog followed her and she run ran away until one of the neighbors hit the dog with a stone.
This behavior from adolescents teenagers made makes our neighborhood unsafe for our children. Most of the dogs are big and vicious.
Perhaps, it would be useful for police to arrest catch the dogs by police. The police should insist that the owners of the dangers dogs pledge to keep it them away from public streets.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Hasan Ali
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Complain- IELTS Exercise
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my concern for some adolescents behavior in my neighborhood.
The adolescents allow their dogs to run widely in public street which causing dangerous (you must use a substantiv) for our families. Yesterday, I am sorry to tell you report (I don't think "tell you" is wrong but report is better) that one of these dogs attacked my niece during along her way to the supermarket. She is thirteen years old. The dog followed her and she run a way till one of neighbors hit the dog by stone.
This behavior from adolescents made our neighborhood unsafe for our children. Most of the dogs are big (you might look up a few synonyms for big; it's not wrong but range of vocabulary is important) and vicious.
Perhaps, it would be useful to arrest capture the dogs by police (I would remove by the police. It's not always the police who handles dangerous animals.). The police should insist that the dangerous dogs owners pledge to keep them away from the public streets.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Hasan Ali
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