Most popular snacks in my country
I wast studying a little and I found this sort of challenge, It says that I had to write about snaks and I just kept wondering what snaks are my favs, an also what are the most popular here in Mexico.
well, as well as around the world we use to eat a lot of popcorn that as you shurely know It's burst open corn, we eat it with a lot of spicy sauce, ketchup (I love popcorn whit this), mayonnaise and sometimes lemon. we also like to eat peanut with salt, lemon and we never miss the spicy sause. It's verry popular accompained by a bear with friend. I'm really into all food that includes peanut, It's one of my favorites seeds. we also like to eat a snak made with mango, you just have to peel it and cut it in pieces then put it in a dish, and enjoy it with lemon and hot spicy.
Now that I'm writing this I just realize how much we like spicy food, I actually can fell something in my mouth haha.
I hope you are well, If I made a mistake please make me know, I'll be very thankfull. and If you have time, tell me what kind of snaks you like the most!
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Most popular snacks in my country
I was studying a little and I found this sort of challenge. It says that I had to write about snacks and I just kept wondering what snacks are my favs, and also what are the most popular here in Mexico.Well, as well as around the world we use to eat a lot of popcorn that, as you surely know, It's burst open corn. We eat it with a lot of spicy sauce, ketchup (I love popcorn with this), mayonnaise and sometimes lemon. We also like to eat peanuts with salt, lemons, and we never miss the spicy sauce. It's very popular accompanied by a bear with friend. I'm really into all foods that includes peanuts, it's one of my favorites seeds. we also like to eat a snack made with mangoes, you just have to peel it and cut it in pieces then put it in a dish, and enjoy it with lemon and hot spicy.
Now that I'm writing this I just realized how much we like spicy food, I actually can feel something in my mouth haha.
I hope you are well, If I made a mistake please make me know, I'll be very thankful. and If you have time, tell me what kind of snacks you like the most!
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Most popular snacks in my country
I was studying a little and I found this sort of challenge, It says that I have to write about snaks and I just kept wondering how snaks are my favs, and also how they are the most popular here in Mexico !well, as well as around the world we used to eat a lot of popcorn that as you shurely know It's burst open corn, we eat it with a lot of spicy sauce, ketchup (I love popcorn whit this), mayonnaise and sometimes lemon. we also like to eat peanut with salt, lemon and we never miss the spicy sause. It's verry popular accompained by a bear with friend. I'm really into all food that includes peanut, It's one of my favorite seeds. we also like to eat a snak made with mango, you just have to peel it and cut it into pieces then put it in a dish, and enjoy it with lemon and hot spicy.
Now while I'm writing this I just realize how much we like spicy food, I actually can feel something in my mouth haha.
I hope you are doing well, If I made a mistake please let me know, I'll be very thankfull. and If you have time, tell me what kind of snaks you like the most!
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Hello Hector!
That was a very interesting entry about snacks! I too love popcorn, though I admit I never put anything but butter and salt on mine.
The underlined words are words that you simply misspelled.
The yellow words need a bit more explaining.
Remember that when talking about plural "snacks" you use which, instead of what.
Favs is not a word. You probably mean to say favorite.
Instead of "use to" (past tense) you could use "also" (present tense) to explain that your country also eats a lot of popcorn.
Instead of saying "It's burst open corn" (it's should be lowercased by the way), you should say "as you surely know is burst open corn." You could also say and, as you surely know, it is burst open corn. Hope that makes sense!
I did not know if you were trying to say "beer" as in alcohol or "bear" as in something else, but either way, you should probably put an a before friend.
Instead of "make me know it," it should be "let me know." And instead of "I'll be very thankful," it should be "I would be very thankful."
Hope that made sense and was helpful!
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