I need a little help

Hello everybody, I'm a french worker and in my company I have to introduce someone.
Could you tell me if these following sentences is correct ?

Raphaël graduated from a two-year technical degree in digital systems. During his studies, he had a two-month internship in Slovenia and this year, he starts a third year professional degree in embedded marine electronics systems specialization. He also works as a windsurf instructor.

Thanks so much for your help

I hope that helps :)

Need a little help

Hello everybody, I'm a French employee and in my company I have* to introduce someone.
Could you tell me if those following sentences is correct ?

Raphaël graduated from a two-year technical degree in digital systems. During his studies, he had a two-month internship in Slovenia and this year, he starts a third year professional degree in embedded marine electronics systems specialization. He also works as a windsurf instructor.

Thanks so much for your help.

* On ne peut pas contracter le "I have" dans une tournure "(sujet) have + infinitive" si cela exprime le sens "(sujet) + devoir + infinitif" ;)

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Need a little help

Hello everybody, I'm a french worker and in my company I've I have to introduce someone to my co-workers.
Could you tell me if those the following sentences is are correct ?

Raphaël graduated from a two year technical degree program in digital systems. During his studies, he had a two-month internship in Slovenia and this year, he starts work on a third three year professional degree in embedded marine electronics systems specialization. He also works as a windsurfing instructor.  (Question: il travaille encore comme un instructeur, ou "he has also worked as a windsurfing instructor."?).  

Thanks so much for your help

Need a little help

Hello everybody, I'm a French worker and in my company I've to introduce someone.
Please could you tell me if the following sentences are correct ?

Raphaël graduated after completing  a two year technical degree in digital systems. During his studies he had a two-month internship in Slovenia and this year, he starts a postgraduate degree, specalizing in embedded marine electronics systems specialization. He also works as a windsurf instructor. (correct if he is still doing this, but say 'has worked as' .... if he has completed this work)

Thanks so much for your help