[ A friend of mine came to Osaka 61]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand.
[Part-Seven]
I and a friend of mine got to LAOX and were looking for the restroom. Then, I found a sales person and told him about our issue. Then, the person instructed the restroom exact location friendly. Then we finished our pees. After that, we looked around insides buildings.
Let me tell you my first experience of
LAOX. When I was in Fukuoka, I knew this tax free department store.
There were so many Chinese customers who were many groups of tour visiters. I saw several tour guides who were hanging a frag each by one which writing Mandarin.
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[ A friend of mine came to Osaka 61]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how wouldyou go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand.
[Part-Seven]
When my friend and I got to Laox, we were immediately looking for the restroom. I asked a salesperson, and he gladly directed us to its location. After we emptied out bladders, we could have a look around the store.
The first time I went to Laox, I was in Fukuoka. I was surprised by the amount Chinese tourists browsing the tax-free department store. There were tour guides leading them around, handing out pamphlets in mandarin.
Note: I'm not sure what you mean by 'I saw several tour guides who were hanging a frag each by one which writing Mandarin.' What is a 'frag'?
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