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Diary 31.08.2017 It is already the last day of August but the weather is still hot, therefore I keep using cold water for showering and washing. I think if I keep doing with cold water showering everyday until the winter comes and then I probably can keep on the cold water showering during the whole winter. I think my body has already used to be the cold water, besides the room temperature is not so pleasant for it.

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Diary 31.08.2017

It is already the last day of August but the weather is still hot, therefore I keep using cold water for showering and washing. I think if I keep doing taking cold showers everyday until winter, then I will probably keep on taking cold showers during the whole winter.

I think my body is already used to the cold water. Besides, the room temperature is not so pleasant.
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Diary 31.08.2017

It is already the last day of August but the weather is still hot, therefore I keep using cold water for showering and washing. I think if I keep doing with cold water showering with cold water everyday until the winter comes and then I probably can keep on the cold water showering with cold water during the whole winter.

I think my body has already gotten used to be the cold water, besides but the hot room temperature is not so pleasant for it.
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Diary 31.08.2017

It is already the last day of August but the weather is still hot, therefore I keep using cold water for showering and washing. I think if I continue showering with cold water everyday until winter comes then I can probably keep showering in cold water throughout the rest of winter.

I think my body has already become used to the cold water. Besides, the room temperature is not very pleasant.


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