Run! Moerus! 2
Moerus had came to the city all the way to buy her wedding dress and a dinner for the wedding because of her wedding. After buying them, he walked around a main street of the city. He had a old playmate, who is Serinuntius. He worked as a bricklayer in this city. Moerus was going to visit him. He was looking forward to meet him after a long interval.
As he was walking down the street, he noticed the odd state of the city. it was quiet. Though It was natural that the city was dark because the sun had gone down, but he felt the whole state of the city was dreary not just because of the night. He, who was easy-going, was getting antsy gradually.
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Moerus had come came to the city all the way to buy her wedding dress and a dinner for the wedding because of her wedding. After buying them, she walked around a main street of the city. SheHe had an old playmate, who is Serinuntius. He worked as a bricklayer in the this city. Moerus was going to visit him. SheHe was looking forward to meet him after a long time interval.
As shehe was walking down the street, she noticed the odd state of the city. It was quiet. Though it was natural that the city was dark because the sun had gone down, but he felt that the whole state of the city was dreary not just because of the night. She, who was easy-going, was getting antsy gradually.
*Good job! I'm guessing Moerus is a girl because of the first sentence stating, "...to buy her wedding dress..." Otherwise, all mentions of 'she' should be 'he'.
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