Smoking
I discussed about Smoking with my teacher today.
Both I and he hate smoking because of the bad smell.
When I 'm with my friends who smoke a lot, my suits or clothe easily absorb the disguisting smell of smoke.
Tokyo metropolitan government is trying to make smoke free places with banning smoking for 2020 Olympics in Tokyo.
I also hope better environment for all people around the world.
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Hi Tetsu, I made some corrections. I hope they help you!
Andy
Smoking
I discussed about Smoking with my teacher today.I talked about smoking with my teacher today.
I discussed smoking with my teacher today.
I discussed the habit of smoking with my teacher today. (less confusing)
Both I and he hate smoking because of the bad smell.
Both he and I hate smoking because of the bad smell. (courtesy to put "he" first)
When I 'm with my friends who smoke a lot, my suits or clothes easily absorb the disgusting smell of smoke.
The Tokyo metropolitan government is trying to make smoke free places by banning smoking from the 2020 Olympics in Tokyo.
I also hope for a better environment for all people around the world.
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