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I like this Japanese Drama very much body Could you correct my English and make it sound more natural, please? I knew I totally messed speaking, but I sincerely wrote the paragraph. I'm very fond of "Hiyokko", it's on NHK channel at 8am every morning. I can't miss every time , my heart gets interweaved I can't take my eyes off of the drama, because it's steadily on to a climax. The story is reaching to the last stage in S eptember . I make recording the drama if I won't be able to watch it. I can't help myself to sob while watching it,my tears are coming from inside. The each time only shows in 15 minutes, but it truly has a Japanese heart that we seldom express such straight feelings outloud. I'm so touched by that as we,Japanese people used to be experienced 1960-1970 in Showa era, we have same sentiment, we worked hard, compassion, consideration to others, tie friendship, caring, self-esteem, relationships among human beings. The drama is so human touching. We might think it wasn't a perfect time for our economy growth, and it was after war was over but there are full of warmth heart, great things we miss and it was a great time to brings back our precious memories in our parents childhood was look like.

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I like this Japanese Drama very much

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Can you correct my English and make it sound more natural, please? I know that I totally messed up speaking, but I sincerely wrote the paragraph, as well as I could.
I'm very fond of "Hiyokko", it's on the NHK channel at 8am every morning. I can't miss it, every time my heart gets interweaved involved, and I can't take my eyes off of the drama TV, because it's steadily on getting to a the climax. The story is reaching to the last stage episode in September . I make record the drama show if I won't be able to watch it. I can't help myself but to sob while watching it, my tears are come from inside. The show each time is only shows in 15 minutes long, but it truly has a Japanese heart that we seldom express such straight direct feelings out loud. I'm so touched by that as we Japanese people used to be experienced in 1960-1970 in during the Showa era, we had the same sentiment, we worked hard, had compassion, were considerate to others, had tight friendship, were caring, had self-esteem, and had relationships among human beings. The drama show is so human touching. We might have thought that think it wasn't a perfect time for our economy growth, and it was after the war was over, but they were full of warmth heart, great things we miss and it was a great time that shows us what to brings back our precious memories in our parents childhood was look like.

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