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28/08/2017 Grace’s Journal
Today ,I went to the park for morning exercise, but it was too much water on the ground, because it was rained Sunday, so I went to a playground of the colleague nearby the park.
I met a guy who was running for over 20 years, he said he never get sick ,he is even bothered by it. And also attend a lot of marathon . I hope I could attend the marathon one day .
30/08/2017 Sunny Grace’s Journal
Today I went the park for morning exercising as usual ,
Usually I walk for 3 circle, then run 4 circle, it takes me around 1 hours, today I decide to run for 1 more circle, finally I did it. Gradually ,I will run for more circles,Maybe someday I can attend marathon.
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28/08/2017 Grace’s Journal
Today ,I went to the park for morning exercise, but it there was too much water on the ground, because it was had rained Sunday, so I went to a playground of the near my colleague, who lives nearby the park.
I met a guy who was had been running for over 20 years, hHe said he never gets sick; ,he is even bothered by it. And He also attends a lot of marathon . I hope I could attend can run a the marathon one day .
30/08/2017 Sunny Grace’s Journal
Today I went to the park for morning exercising as usual. ,
Usually I walk for 3 circles, then run 4 circles;, it takes me around 1 hours,. Ttoday I decided to run for 1 more circle,: finally I did it!. Gradually ,I will run for more circles,. Maybe someday I can attend run a marathon.
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