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Nausicaa I’m reading a comic called “Nausicaa”. It’s a story after great war. This war called “7 days of Nucleus”. I read it only half. But theme is already heavy. I’m looking forward to it become more interesting story as the story progresses.

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Nausicaa

I’m reading a comic called “Nausicaa”.
It’s a story after a  great war.
This war is called “7 days of Nucleus”.
I read it only halfway. Or I've read only half of the comic.
But the theme is already heavy.
I’m looking forward to it becoming more interesting as the story progresses.


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Hi! Good effort here, the comic sounds very interesting! Just be careful with articles [a, an, the] and verb tenses.

Hope this helps!

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Nausicaa

I’m reading a comic called “Nausicaa”.
It’s a story set/about after a great war.
This war is called “7 days of Nucleus”.
I have read it only half of it so far, but the theme is already heavy.
I’m looking forward to it become a more interesting story as the story progresses.
1

Nausicaa

I’m reading a comic called “Nausicaa”.
It’s a story after a great war.
The war was called “7 days of Nucleus”.
I have read it only halfway.
But the theme is already heavy.
I’m looking forward to it becoming a more interesting story as the story progresses.

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忘れ物:定冠詞の 'the'   //   不定冠詞の 'a'

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