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Diary '17/8/29 Missile from neighborhood I talked with my English teacher through Skype in the morning. We talked what we did yesterday and the missile from Japanese neighbor this morning. He asked me what the purpose of North Korea was. He said they didn't have any ability to fight against US or Japan because they didn't even have enough food. He also said it was weird that Korean Peninsula was divided into two countries. I agreed with his opinion, because they used to be one country. I hope that two country would become one in the near future. As I live in modern democratic country, I feel it strange that there are some communist nations in the neighborhood in this 21st century. I feel sorry for people in North Korea, people in Tibet, people in Uighur. I want to do something for them, but I have no idea what to do. I think the only solution is to change the government. After the lesson, I started to work. Today I made some prototypes of wireless alarming devices. It went pretty well. Tomorrow I'm going to write specification sheets about them.

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Diary '17/8/29 Missile from neighborhood

I talked with my English teacher through Skype in the this morning. We talked about what we did yesterday and the missile from Japanese Japan's neighbor this morning. He asked me what the purpose of North Korea was. He said they didn't have any ability to fight against the US or Japan because they didn't don't even have enough food. He also said it was weird that the Korean Peninsula was divided into two countries. I agreed with his opinion, because they used to be one country.

I hope that the two countries would will become one in the near future. As I live in modern democratic country, I feel it is strange that there are some communist nations in the neighborhood world ('neighborhood' is for smaller surrounding areas, within your city for example) in this 21st century.

I feel sorry for people in North Korea, people in Tibet, people in Uighur. I want to do something for them, but I have no idea what to do. I think the only solution is to change the government.

After the lesson, I started went to work. Today I made some prototypes of wireless alarming devices. It went pretty well. Tomorrow I'm going to write specification sheets about them.


I tried to break your sentences into reasonable paragraphs. Typically you would separate common thoughts or sentences from one another so the reader can tell when you are moving onto a different topic. Very minimal corrections having to do with singular vs. plural. Other than that, great job!

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Diary '17/8/29 Missile from neighborhood

I talked with my English teacher through Skype in the morning.

We talked what we did yesterday and the missile from Japanese neighbor this morning.

He asked me what the purpose of North Korea was. He said they didn't have any

ability to fight against US or Japan because they didn't even have enough food.

He also said it was weird that Korean Peninsula was divided into two countries.

I agreed with his opinion because they used to be one country.

I hope that two countries would become one/reunite in the near future.

As I live in a modern democratic country, I feel it strange that there are some communist nations in the neighborhood in this 21st century.

I feel sorry for people in North Korea, people in Tibet, people in Uighur.

I want to do something for them, but I have no idea what to do.

I think the only solution is to change the government.


After the lesson, I started to work. Today I made some prototypes of wireless

alarming devices. It went pretty well. Tomorrow I'm going to write specification sheets

about them.


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