My first composition on italki
It's my first day to be here, checking out so many wonderful functions designed for language learners.
As a native speaker of Mandarin, it's been such a tough start for me to master a whole new language.
Though I've been in learning English for years, I still cannot deal with my speaking&listening.
Even just telling wrong and right (of a sentence) is just so hard for me.
It depends so much on a language circumstances. That is, I need you so much to help me, and so I can do the same.
Having gone through a few articles and comments here, I found all of you are just so enthusiastic about helping others.
I feel that I'm in a paradise for us learners.
Please tell me where I wrote wrong or just not native/natural. Thank u so much!
诚心求助各位能指出哪里不对 哪里说的不够native 在下由衷感谢!
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I love your entry David! It's written really well with only a few mistakes. You've used some impressive, complex structures :D I like your attitude and I'm sure you'll get far if you keep it! All the best in learning a new language :-)
My first composition on italki
It's my first day to be here, checking out so many wonderful functions designed for language learners.As a native speaker of Mandarin, it's been such a tough start for me willing to master a whole new language.
Though I've been in learning English for years, I still struggle with my speaking & listening.
Even deciding what is wrong and right (grammar wise) is quite hard for me.
It all depends so much on a language circumstances. That is why, I need your help so much, and so I can do the same for you.
Having gone through a few articles and comments here, I found all of you are just so enthusiastic about helping others.
I feel that I'm in a paradise for us learners.
Please tell me what I wrote wrong or just not native/natural. Thank u so much!
诚心求助各位能指出哪里不对 哪里说的不够native 在下由衷感谢!
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