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IELTS:government should spend their money on construction of new railway or the old? People have different view about the government funding had better to support the construction of new railway or improvement of existing transport. In my opinion, it is reasonable to construct the new railway based on the maintaining of the quality of existing railway. On the one hand, it is important for some area’s development of economy to build the new railway, especially the area where the people have lead an uninformed life because of the poor transportation system. If it has a good transportation to let the traveler and investor to get there, the area might have enough money to spend on improving their tourism and business. In addition, the construction of new railway will be convenient for the local people to communicate with the outside world. On the other hand, the existing public transport need to be checked and protected to avoid the passengers’ life safety. Because of weather and even some disaster, such as earthquake and flood, the railway might have been damaged in some degree. It might be happened that the damage is so serious that the train left the rail and all the passengers on it will lose their life. So, it is also vital to pour money to improve the railway. In conclusion, whether the money is poured to build the new or the old transport, they has the same importance and they have to be put the same emphasis on.

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IELTS:government should spend their money on construction of new railway or the old?

People have different views about whether government funding is better used to support the construction of a new railway or the improvement of existing transport. In my opinion, it is reasonable to construct the new railway based on maintaining the quality of the existing railway.
On the one hand, it is important for some area economic development to build the new railway, especially the area where people have led an uninformed life because of the poor transportation system. If it has good transportation to let the traveler and investor get there, the area might have enough money to spend on improving their tourism and business. In addition, the construction of a new railway will be convenient for the local people to communicate with the outside world.
On the other hand, the existing public transport needs to be checked and protected to avoid any danger to passenger safety. Because of weather and even some disasters, such as earthquakes and floods, the railway could be been damaged to some degree. It might happen that the damage is so serious that a train could leave the rails and all the passengers on it could lose their lives. So, it is also vital to pour money into improving the railway.
In conclusion, whether the money is poured into  building new or old transport, they have the same importance and they both need to have the same emphasis.

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