Low salary secure job VS High salary risky job
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4. Low salary secure job VS High salary risky job
There are so diverse life style in our society. Some people may prefer high salary even if it requires a quite of risk. However, I think a low salary secure job is better for a relaxed and healthy life than a high salary risky job. In this essay, I will briefly present a couple of reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, I think it is important to have a secure job for maintaining our life stable. If "having high salary risky job" is the concept opposite to "low salary secure job", it means that there are always the possibility to lose job according to circumstances. Not to mention when you have a family, even if you live alone, you cannot keep your living well without your profession and income. Obviously, nobody would want this situation.
On top of that, in most cases, a high salary risky job have a negative impact on the health of the mind and body. This is due to the intensity of the work we have to undertake to earn a high salary, and the worry that we may lose our job at any time. And such anxiety will make people more involved in work. So if you have such a job, you will usually spend most of your time working. Even if you earn a lot of money, you will never be happy if you live a life that is always chased by mountains of work. One of my acquaintances was a businessman who had to work day and night for his family because his income was always unstable in his young age and now he suffer from cancer because of his stress. It is rare for anyone who can say that this life is happy.
In summary, I think that in order for a person to live happily, even if there is a small salary, a condition must be guaranteed to enjoy it. In this regard, I believe the low salary secure job is more valuable for carefree life.
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Low salary secure job VS High salary risky job
Hi! I'm TOEFL beginner. I'm trying to practice my writing alone.If possible, I would like to get help from you about my grammar and vocabulary. I would also appreciate any other advice you may have. Many thanks!
4. Low salary secure job VS High salary risky job
There are so many diverse lifestyles in our society. Some people may prefer a high salary even if it requires a quite a bit of risk. However, I think a low salary secure job is better for a relaxed and healthy life than a high salary risky job. In this essay, I will briefly present a couple of reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, I think it is important to have a secure job for maintaining our life stability. If "having a high salary risky job" is the concept opposite to "a low salary secure job", it means that there is always the possibility to of losing the job according to circumstances. If you live alone, not to mention when you have a family, even if you live alone, you cannot keep your living well without your profession job and or income. Obviously, nobody would want this situation.
On top of that, in most cases, a high salary risky job could have a negative impact on the health of the mind and body. This is due to the intensity of the work we have to undertake to earn a high salary, and the worry that we may lose our job at any time. And such anxiety will would make people more involved in their work. So if you have such a job, you will usually spend most of your time working. Even if you earn a lot of money, you will never be happy if you live a life that is always chased by mountains of work. One of my acquaintances was a businessman who had to work day and night for his family because his income was always unstable in his young age and now he suffers from cancer because of his stress. It is rare for anyone who to can say that this life is happy.
In summary, I think that in order for a person to live happily, even if there is it has a small salary, a condition must be guaranteed to enjoy it. In this regard, I believe the low salary secure job is more valuable for a carefree life.
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