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The Greatest Love of All Loving yourself, living independently, discovering the beauty inside, and learning to be happy all the time are all the key points of this song no matter what happens in your life. You know, as we grow up year by year, we find that fewer and fewer things can make us happy. We lost a lot of simple pleasure that we used to enjoying during our childhood. Actually I think discovering the beauty inside simply equals to trying to find everything that looks like trivial but touching, and makes you feel warm and happy. Besides that, it also includes some good moralities, like helping people in need, donating, and doing charity work. These behaviors show warm love to others and are just like the light of love to brighten disadvantaged people's future. However, I don't think loving yourself is contradictory with helping others. In fact, if you always like to complain and expecting rewards when you are helping others, you could never feel any happy at the end. Loving yourself is the first step to love others. It'll be hard to imagine that a person who is not satisfied with himself would be willing to accept others' shortcomings and help others from their heart. So, from now on, accept your own shortcomings, inspire yourself, believe in your capabilities, take it easy and be content with your life. You should always keep it in mind that you deserve everything that you are possessing, and you are grateful to every chance that comes to you.

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The Greatest Love of All

Loving yourself, living independently, discovering the beauty inside, and learning to be happy all the time are all the key points of this song, no matter what happens in your life*. You know, as we grow up year by year, we find that fewer and fewer things can make us happy. We lost a lot of simple pleasures that we used to enjoying during our childhood. Actually, I think discovering the beauty inside simply means trying to find everything that looks like trivial but upon touching it**, and makes you feel warm and happy. Besides that, it also includes having morals, like helping people in need, donating, and doing charity work. This behaviors shows warm love to others and is just like the light of love*** that brightens disadvantaged people's future.

However, I don't think loving yourself is contradictory with helping others. In fact, if you always like to complain and expecting rewards when you are helping others, you will never feel any happy at the end. Loving yourself is the first step prior to loving others. It's be hard to imagine that a person who is not satisfied with himself would be willing to accept others' shortcomings and help them**** from his heart. So, from now on, accept your own shortcomings, inspire yourself, believe in your capabilities, take it easy and be content with your life. You should always keep it in mind that you deserve everything that you are possessing, and you should be grateful to every chance that comes to you.

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*That's a big sentence. You might want to consider re-writing it by placing "no matter what happens in your life" after "all the time", so that the syntax "flows" better.

** What you want to convey here, is a little vague. I think you want to say "find pleasure and meaning in the most trivial and simple things in life, if we devote some more time to them". It's not very clear what "touching it" means.

*** Repeating the word "love" is a little redundant here.

**** Again repeating the word "others" is redundant.


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