Father's day message
Hey guys, I have a little Father's Day note I want to give to my dad in Korean and would greatly appreciate corrections!
한국 가기전애 모든것을 잘 정니해서 편안이 가면 좋게습니다 - 화이팅!
그동안은 맛있는 초콜릿을 드새요
즐거운 아버지날 되세요!
Thanks once again :)
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Father's day message
Hey guys, I have a little Father's Day note I want to give to my dad in Korean and would greatly appreciate corrections!가시기전에 모든것이 다 잘 정리되어서 한국에 편안하게 돌아가셨으면 좋겠습니다 - 화이팅!
그동안 맛있는 초콜릿 드세요
즐거운 아버지의 날 되세요!
Thanks once again :)
Great!
I made the sentences sound more natural.
I think he'll be proud of you. :)
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