28th August 2017
1. Yesterday, My wife and I went to the swimming competition . My daughter took part in it. She took part in it for the first time.It was the official record competition.
2. We were really nervous than her, but she swam as usual.
3. We were pretty happy because she set a personal best.
4. She practices today, too.
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28th August 2017
1. Yesterday, my wife and I went to the a swimming competition . My daughter took part in it. She took part in it for the first time. It was the an official record competition.2. We were really more nervous than her (1), but she swam as usual.
3. We were pretty happy because she set a personal best.
4. She practices today, too.
(1) "more nervous than she" is more grammatically correct, but it doesn't sound natural to most English speakers.
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