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The Valley of the Fallen in Spain. At the end of the Spanish Civil War, a dictator was the winner of the war and all the human rights disappear of Spain. Thousands of citizens were prisoner in concentration camps and unfortunately many of them were killed. Then, the new government decided to build a tomb to bury the dictator. A beautiful place close of God with bones of soldiers and prisoners like a crazy man, simillar to the tomb of a pharaoh. It name was: The Valley of the Fallen. Forty years after the dictator’s death and Democracy came back to Spain. A new Constitution was voted which gave my country an opportunity to recover the civils rights. Unfortunately, nobody found a solution to thousand of people killed and forgotten in many places around the territory. Currently Spain is the second country of the World, behind Kampuchea with more bodies abandoned on fields and common graves without any identification. Many families tried to recover their grandparents buried with the dictator body in a crazy mausoleum, but different democratic government didn’t want to find a solution for all them. United Nations and other international organizations asked the Spanish government a humanitarian solution but nobody answered. Actually many of richest families of Spain, earned all their fortune along the war and consider a problem open the common graves and identify who were the murdered and buried there. In my opinion no country can forget their past. Millions of Spanish citizens need to know what happened in the Spanish Civil War. Today especially, people has right to exhume all bodies murdered, if we really want to bury and forget our wounds forever.

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The Valley of the Fallen in Spain.

At the end of the Spanish Civil War, a dictator was the winner of the war and all the human rights disappeared in Spain. Thousands of citizens were prisoners in concentration camps and, unfortunately, many of them were killed. Then, the new government decided to build a tomb to bury the dictator. A beautiful place close to God with bones of soldiers and prisoners like a crazy man, simillar to the tomb of a pharaoh. Its name was: The Valley of the Fallen.
Forty years after the dictator’s death democracy came back to Spain. A new constitution[1] was voted which gave my country an opportunity to recover the civil rights. Unfortunately, nobody found a solution to the thousands of people killed and forgotten in many places around the territory. Currently Spain is the second country in the World, behind Kampuchea, with more bodies abandoned on fields and common graves without any identification.
Many families tried to recover their grandparents buried with the dictator's body in a crazy mausoleum, but different democratic governments didn’t want to find a solution for any of them. The United Nations and other international organizations asked the Spanish government for a humanitarian solution but nobody answered.
Actually, many of richest families of Spain earned all their fortunes during the war and considered it a problem opening the common graves and identifying who were the murdered buried there.
In my opinion, no country can forget their past. Millions of Spanish citizens need to know what happened in the Spanish Civil War. Today, especially, people have a right to exhume all the murdered bodies, if we really want to bury and forget our wounds forever.

[1. If the phrase was "Spanish Constitution" then the word constitution would be capitalized.] 

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