"Dunkirk", Part one.
A month ago I went to the cinema with my boyfriend. We watched a movie, it s called "Dunkirk", by Christopher Nolan .
This movie made a very strong impression on me.
"Dunkirk" is based on real historical events. Over three hundred thousand English French and Belgian soldiers were trapped on the beaches of Dunkirk. They were blocked by German military after the battle of Dunkirk in 1940. Soldiers were waiting for a rescue. British government tried to rescue them and to save their lives. Along with military naval ships, many civil boats were sent to Dunkirk coast to return these soldiers in England. It was very dangerous way. German planes attacked ships. People were dying.
In this movie we see a brave old man with his two sons. They was sailing on a boat to Dunkirk coast. They were very afraid. However, they were keeping their composure and moving forward. They wanted to rescue soldiers.
In this movie we see a brave pilot. He was protecting soldiers in the air. He attacked Nazi planes which were killing soldiers.
to be continued......
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"Dunkirk", Part one.
A month ago I went to the cinema with my boyfriend. We watched a movie, it s called "Dunkirk", by Christopher Nolan .This movie made a very strong impression on me.
"Dunkirk" is based on real historical events. Over three hundred thousand English, French and Belgian soldiers were trapped on the beaches of Dunkirk. They were blocked by the German military after the Battle of Dunkirk in 1940. The soldiers were waiting for a rescue. The British government tried to rescue them and to save their lives. Along with military naval ships, many civilian boats were sent to the Dunkirk coast to return these soldiers to England. It was very dangerous way. German planes attacked ships. People were dying.
In this movie we see a brave old man with his two sons. They were sailing on a boat to the Dunkirk coast. They were very afraid; however, they were keeping their composure and moving forward. They wanted to rescue soldiers.
In this movie we see a brave pilot. He was protecting soldiers from the air. He attacked Nazi planes which were killing soldiers.
to be continued......
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