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My younger sister My sister is 12 years old now, 12 years younger than me. sometimes people are surprised that I have such a younger sister. She is on her summer vacation now. In the next semester, she is going to be a six-grade student. The school where my sister studied has moved, which is close to my home. It is said that the new school is bigger and more beautiful than the older one. However, it is further to my home. In the past six school years, my sister has got a lot of praise from her teachers and is good at some subjects like math, Chinese, and English. She loves reading and watches TV series. Whatever books she wants, i will try to buy the books for her. I hope she could get into the habit of loving reading books. In my opinion, reading can be a great friend who benefits her forever in both her study and the way to live life. In the next year, I hope she could be admitted to a good middle school in my hometown. She takes after to my father. She is tall and has a good skin, which makes​ her attractive. Like ordinary Chinese students, she is expected and taught to be a girl who doesn't anything wrong.

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My younger sister

My sister is 12 years old now, which is 12 years younger than me. sSometimes people are surprised that I have such a younger sister. She is on her summer vacation now. In the next semester, she is going to be a sixth-grade student. The school where my sister studied has moved, which is close to my home. My sister's school, which was close to my home, has moved. It is said that the new school is bigger and more beautiful than the older one. However, it is further to my home. In the past six school years, my sister has gotten/received a lot of praise from her teachers. and She is good at some subjects like math, Chinese, and English. She loves reading and watchesing TV series. Whatever books she wants, i Iwill try to buy the books for her. I hope she could get into the habit of loving to reading books. In my opinion, reading can be a great friend who that will benefits her forever in both her study and the way to live life. In the next year, I hope she could be admitted to a good middle school in my hometown. She takes after to my father. She is tall and has a good skin, which makes her attractive. Like other ordinary Chinese students, she is expected and taught to be a girl who doesn't do anything wrong.
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