my day
I wake up at 6.30 in this morning. then I brush my teeth. After that, I went to the student's hall to have breakfast. However, I found that food hadn't been prepared to sell in the restaurant because it is too early. So I went back to my dorm. I moved my books and put my laptop into the bag, preparing to move to a new dorm nearby. After that, i went to the student's hall again, bought some food back and took them back to my dorm. It is 7.30 when I finished my breakfast. Then I saw my only roommate off. He was leaving for Wuxi city, Jiangsu province, which is a great city to live in. Then I visited youtube and watched some short English conversations.now I am going to read some books.
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My day
I woke up at 6.30 in this morning and then I brushed my teeth. After that, I went to the student's hall to have breakfast. However, I found that food hadn't been prepared yet to sell in the restaurant because it was is too early. So I went back to my dorm. I moved my books and put my laptop into the bag, preparing to move to a new dorm nearby. After that, I went to the student's hall again, bought some food back and took it them back to my dorm. It was is 7.30 when I finished my breakfast. Then I saw my only roommate off. He was leaving for Wuxi city, in Jiangsu province, which is a great city to live in. Then I opened visited YouTube and watched some short English conversations. Now I am going to read some books.0
My day
I woke up at 6.30 in the morning and brushed my teeth. After that, I went to the students' hall to have breakfast. However, I found that food hadn't been prepared in the restaurant because it was too early, so I went back to my dorm. I moved my books and put my laptop into the bag, preparing to move to a new dorm nearby. After that, I went to the students' hall again, brought some food back, and took it back to my dorm. It was 7.30 when I finished my breakfast. Then I saw my only roommate off. He was leaving for Wuxi city, Jiangsu province, which is a great city to live in. Then I visited youtube and watched some short English conversations. Now I am going to read some books.0
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