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Pxxx flew over I have a 2 months old son. He is incredibly cute! Today he smiled a lot more than ever. He looked so happy, and I was happy too. But I didn't realized that he didn't do a pooh before then. ...And finally the time had come. He became quiet and look around, and suddenly I heard a sound like thunder. Pooh flew over! from diaper through his back! NOOOOO!

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Pxxx flew over

I have a two-months-old son. (two-month-old son) He is incredibly cute!
Today he smiled a lot more than ever. He looked so happy, and I was happy too.
But I didn't realized that he didn't do a poop before then.
...And finally the time had come.
He became quiet and looked around, and suddenly I heard a sound like thunder.
Poop flew over! from diaper through his back! Do you mean: " From his diaper to his back"? NOOOOO!
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Pxxx flew over

I have a two-month old son. He is incredibly cute!
Today he smiled a lot - more than ever. He looked so happy, and I was happy too.
But I didn't realized that he didn't do a poop before then.
...And finally the time had come.
He became quiet and looked around, and suddenly I heard a sound like thunder.
Poop flew all over - from diaper through to his back! NOOOOO!
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Pxxx flew over out

I have a 2 months old son. He is incredibly cute!
Today he smiled a lot more than ever usual. He looked so happy, and I was happy too.
But I didn't realized that he didn't do a pooh before then. hadn't pooped yet
...And finally the time had come.
He became quiet and look around, and suddenly I heard a sound like thunder.
Pooh flew over! from his diaper through up his back! NOOOOO!


Good story!  A few notes:

* When you are describing a noun with a number, use the singular . "3-story building, 5-page paper"  For people's ages, the correct way is to write "5-year-old" but often we get lazy, so it's very common to write "5 year old" without the dashes.

* Poo and poop are the same. Pooh is the name of Winnie the Pooh, a children's book character. You could read the stories to your son!

* You could also say, "Poo flew out of his diaper and up his back." That sounds most natural to me.



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Poop = American word. Poo = British word. Pooh = name of famous bear called "Winnie the Pooh"

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