Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
Writing task 6
当我吃食物的时候，我最常吃的是鸡肉，烤肉串，当我喝酒的时候，我经常吃焦炭和水。随着岁月的流逝，我开始逐渐越来越多地吃饭。我做了很多运动，例如网球，蛋糕，橄榄球和游泳。我相信健康的生活方式可以让一个人幸福快乐。
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Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
Writing task 6当我吃食物的时候，我最常吃的是鸡肉，烤肉串，当我喝酒的时候，我经常吃焦炭和水。
我经常吃的食物有鸡肉，烤肉串，在喝酒的时，常常喝可乐（焦炭和水是什么?）
随着岁月的流逝，我开始逐渐越来越多地吃饭。
现在我更多的是吃饭。
我做了很多运动，例如网球，蛋糕，橄榄球和游泳。
我做了很多运动，网球，橄榄球，游泳（蛋糕?）
我相信健康的生活方式可以让一个人幸福快乐。（这个句子可以）
i don't know exactly what do you want us to check out your sentences. i mean your grammar isn't wrong, but Chinese people won't talk like this. so to be strict, your grammar may go wrong. so i just express your meaning in my way, i hope it can be helpful to you.
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Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
Writing task 6当我吃
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Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
Writing task 6当我吃食物的时候，我最常吃的是鸡肉，烤肉串，当我喝酒饮料的时候，我经常吃焦炭和水。随着岁月的流逝，我开始逐渐越来越多地吃饭。我做了很多运动，例如网球，蛋糕，橄榄球和游泳。我相信健康的生活方式可以让一个人幸福快乐。
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Thanks so much
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Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
Writing task 6当我吃食物饭的时候，我最常吃的是鸡肉，烤肉串。当我喝酒或者饮料的时候，我经常吃喝焦炭（碳酸饮料？焦炭不能吃的）和水。随着岁月的流逝，我开始逐渐越来越多地吃饭（饭量变得越来越大/饭吃的越来越多）。我做了很多运动，例如打网球，制作蛋糕（蛋糕是食物不是运动，制作蛋糕才是运动），打橄榄球和游泳。我相信健康的生活方式可以让一个人幸福快乐。
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