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Cool Bean Dessert Made by Pea Have you ever eaten a kind of cool bean dessert made by pea in summer? My mother always make some peacakes in summer. It is really a good snack for summer refreshing. Here are main steps to make it. Pea(Chinese called wandou) is the main material, first soaking the peas in water for one day in order to remove their skins, second(it is the most important step) boiling the peas until they are mushy, of course you need to contral the boiling time to make sure you can make the figures what you want. Crystal sugar is the necessary ingredient to make a successful peacake too. It was said the peacake were tributed to the royal palace in Qing Dynasty, so many civilians couldn't afford such tributs. But eventally the home make peacakes were more popular with the advantages in price, taste and making stytles, more and more people can enjoy this kind of snack in summer. The main reason I love the snack is beacuse of it's keeping the food's original nature. You can try to make one if you are a true foodie. Don't forget to put your peacake into refrigrerator, that's the real cool bean dessert you made.

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1. If thing A contains/includes thing B then thing A is made of or from thing B. If thing A is created/manufactured/produced etc. by thing/person B then thing A is made by thing B.

2. Because these are instructions for a recipe, you need to use the imperative tense.

3. Tribute is not a verb in English, only a noun thus you need to use the construct "to pay/give tribute"!

4. I was struggling to fix this so I decided simply to restructure it. Is the meaning intact?

5. I had a lot of difficulties trying to understand what exactly you were trying to say here and I had to give up.


Feel free to ask for clarification on anything that seems strange or incorrect etc.  Your English is really good, though!

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Cool Bean Dessert Made by from Peas

Have you ever eaten a kind of cool bean dessert made by of [1] peas, in Summer? My mother always makes <me; us> some peacakes in when it's Summer as it's a really a good snack for Summer-time refreshingment!

Here are some basic instructions on how to make it:

Peas (Chinese called wandou in Chinese) is are the main material ingredient.

First, soaking [2] the peas in water for one day in order to remove their skins.

Second (it (and) this is the most important step) boiling [2] the peas until they are become mushy. Of course, you need to contral the boiling time to make sure you can make the figures what you want [5] <struggling to translate>. Crystal sugar is the another necessary ingredient needed to make a successful peacake too.

It was is said that the peacakes were tributed <paid; given> as tribute [3] to the royal palace in during the Qing Dynasty, so which meant that many civilians couldn't afford them such tributs. But eventually the home make Eventually, however, peacakes were became more popular with the advantages in [5] <struggling to translate> price, taste and making preparation stytles, thus nowadays more and more people can enjoy this kind of snack in the Summer. The main reason that I love the this snack is beacuse of it's keeping the food's original nature because the recipe stays true to the original [4]. You too can try to make one, if you're a true foodie!

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