All High school students should learn basic economics. (AG/DIS)
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1. All High school students should learn basic economics. (AG/DIS)
Economics seems like quite difficult and distinct from us on the face of it. However, in fact, this subject is closely related to our real life. We need to learn economics to understand not only our personal wealth management, but how our world is going.
In this respect, I would like to suggest that all high school students should learn basic economics. Whatever they will do in the future, economics would directly effect on their everything such as food, clothing and shelter. Moreover, if students don't learn economics at all, we will lost important critical view on economy for our society. In my case, I had no chance to learn cultural subjects including basic economics when I was in high school, because education system in my country made me focused on major subjects only at that point. As a result, honestly, I have not gotten any idea related to economics. I can't manage my budget well, and I can't understand and discuss about economic news on the TV and newspapers. I was lacking in basic concepts about that, so I naturally lost interest in it and it has been kept up to now.
For these reasons, I think learning basic economics in high school is very important because it is helpful for our life's quality and essential to get independent economic opinions.
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Economics seems like it is quite difficult and distinct from us on the face of it. However, in fact, this subject is closely related to our real life. We need to learn economics to understand not only our personal wealth management, but how our world is going.
For these reasons, I think learning basic economics in high school is very important because it is helpful for our life's quality and essential to get independent economic opinions.
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