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About my job - game designer of toys Today, I am going to talk about my job with everyone. I have been graduating from my college for around one year. I am a game designer in a company which produce toys. The main work for this job is to design what responses should be played while the babies are playing the toys. And these responses will be played and controled by the program which is burned in the IC ship. And the IC ships burned with the program will be installed in the toys. The game specific I written need to be sent to my supporter and oversea colleagues to discuss and review. Also, the sentences, sound effects, melodies, short tunes and sung songs which is included in the game specific will all need to be reviewed by everyone. When I have new item, I also need to create the sung songs' lyrics which are shown in my item. I am not a programmer, I am not able to write a program. My company outsources the programs to other companies, so what I need to do everyday is to prompt the programmers to update the program to me. Because there are melodies and short tunes will be played in the program, I also need to ask the composers of my company to recompose the melodies and short tunes. I prompt them to update the songs or programs to me everyday and then send to my supporter and oversea colleagues to review. After that they will give their comments to me. What I need to do is to revise their comments till they are fine for it. I am more likely acting like a conveyyancer rather than a game designer. This job is not limited to any majors because what we are doing is so special that everyone leaned it from scratch. I have colleagues who major in English, in international trade, in electron...And I major in Japanese. It is not a common post, even a little be special. So it makes me always confuse that whether the work experience can play a role in my career life or not. I have been working for nine months and I am considering to quit my job.

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About my job - game designer of toys

Today, I am going to talk about my job with everyone.
I have been graduating from my college for around one year.(I didn't understand. You will be graduating in one year, or you are already graduated?) I am a game designer in a company which produce toys. My main task is to design the responses that babies will hear while playing with the toys. (The verb "play" was used twice in the same sentence) And those responses will be played and controlled by a program which is burned on an IC ship. And those burned IC ships (You can use past participle as an adjective; this makes the text flows better) will be installed in the toys.

The game specification I write needs to be sent to my supporter and oversea colleagues to discuss and review. Also, the sentences, sound effects, melodies, short tunes and songs which are included in the game specification will need to be reviewed by everyone. When I have new item, I also need to create the songs' lyrics which are shown in my item.
I am not a programmer; therefore, I am not able to write a program. (You cannot connect two independent clauses with only a comma. This is called a run-on sentence.) My company outsources the development of the programs to other companies, so what I need to do everyday is to prompt the programmers to update the program to me. Because there are melodies and short tunes will be played in the program, I also need to ask the composers of my company to recompose those melodies and short tunes. I prompt them to update the songs or programs to me everyday, and then, send them to my supporter and oversea colleagues to review. After that they will give their comments to me. What I need to do is to revise their comments till they are fine for it. I am more likely to act like a conveyance rather than a game designer.
This job is not limited to any majors because what we are doing is so special that everyone learned it from scratch. I have colleagues who major in English, in International Trade, in Electronic...And I major in Japanese.
It is not a common post, even a little specialized. So it makes me wonder whether the work experience can play a role in my career life or not. I have been working for nine months, and I am considering to quit my job.

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