2017/8/24 Farewell
The most painful thing in the world is farewell, I hate farewell. When I have to leave my families in order to go to college, I will feel painful, it will make me feel heart break, and I will depress all the day. A few days before parting I will start feeling very sad, I always think I am about to leaving my families what should I do! Oh, I really hate this feeling. Do you hate farewell?
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2017/8/24 Farewell
The most painful thing in the world is farewell, I hate farewells. When I have to leave my family in order to go to college, I will feel pain, it will make me feel heartbreak, and I will be depressed all the day. A few days before parting I will start feeling very sad, I always think I am about to leave my family what should I do! Oh, I really hate this feeling. Do you hate farewells?Hello 星辰少年郎
Farewells are not so bad if you think of them as "See you later"s or as the French say 'au revoir'. You are not leaving them forever and in the 21st Century it is very easy to keep in contact with people through the phone, internet .....
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Bob
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Farewell是永别了，你在诅咒别人死啊666
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