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clue words here are hug, wave, kiss, address with. Is it correct and natural? When I firstly met your mother it seemed to me that she was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen! She looked so gorgeous that I fell in love with her instantly. Every time we saw each other I wanted to kiss her to the cheeks and to the lips so much! But the only thing I could do is to wave (to?) her and looked at her on a distance. The day I could come and introduce myself was the day I would remember all my life. She said “hello”, addressed me with my first name and kissed me to the cheeks. Many years have passed since that time. And now I can hug her so tight as ever. She is my brilliant star.

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clue words here are hug, wave, kiss, address with. Is it correct and natural?

When I first met your mother it seemed to me that she was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen! She looked so gorgeous that I fell in love with her instantly. Every time we saw each other I wanted to kiss her cheeks and lips so much but all I could do was to wave to her and look at her from a distance. The day I came and introduced myself was a day I would remember all my life. She said “hello”, addressed me by my first name and kissed me on the cheek. Many years have passed since then, and now I hug her as tight as ever. She is my twinkling star.

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clue words here are hug, wave, kiss, address with. Is it correct and natural?

The first time i met your mother, it seemed to me that she was the most beautiful girl I have had ever seen! She looked so gorgeous that I fell in love with her instantly. Every time we saw each other, I wanted to kiss her on the cheeks and on her lips so much! But the only thing I could do is to wave to her and look at her in the distance. The day that I could come and introduce myself, was the day I would remember all my life. She said “hello” and addressed me with my first name and kissed me on the cheeks. Many years have passed since that time and now I can hug her tight as ever. She is my brilliant star.

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