My home town My home town suffers from depopulation in the frontier of megalopolis. My home town is in a large city of Kansai area located in western part of Japan. There are a lot of houses and block

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My home town My home town suffers from depopulation in the frontier of megalopolis. My home town is in a large city of Kansai area located in western part of Japan. There are a lot of houses and blocks of flats, but most of them are empty. There is a elementary school, a police box, a small post office, and a nursing home, but no shop, no supermarket, no convenience store, no kindergarten, no nursery. Most people are the elderly, then the population decreases year by year. I heard the elementary school, which I graduated, is going to be closed within several years. We need to develop the way of community development.

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My Hometown

My home town suffers from depopulation on the frontier of the megalopolis.
My home town is in a large city in the Kansai area located in the western part of Japan.
There are a lot of houses and blocks of flats, but most of them are empty.
There is an (because the next word starts with a vowel) elementary school, a police box, a small post office, and a nursing home, but no shop, no supermarket, no convenience store, no kindergarten, no nursery.
Most people are the elderly, then as the population decreases year by year.
I heard the elementary school, where I graduated, is going to be closed within several years.
We need to find a the method of community development.

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My Hometown

My hometown suffers from depopulation in on the frontier of the megalopolis.
My home own is in a large city of in the Kansai area located in the western part of Japan.
There are a lot of houses and blocks of flats, but most of them are empty.
There is an elementary school, a police box, a small post office, and a nursing home, but no shop, no supermarket, no convenience store, no kindergarten, no nursery.
Most people are the elderly, then as the the population decreases year by year.
I heard the elementary school, which where I graduated, is going to be closed within several years.
We need to develop the find a way method of community development.

Thank you for your interesting comment.The strategy of two children is new to me. In my country, the government has implemented several policies for decades, but they've been like only drops in the bucket. I think the decrease in the working population ratio is the essential problem of the aging society with the mandatory age retirement system and the seniority based promotion system. The young people have to pay the pension and the cost of medical care for elderly people so that they still don't have enough money to bring up their children and this country population become elder and elder.

It's totally opposite to my country. Here the president have to make a strategy to reduce the rapidly increase in our population. It is " Each family either boy or girl should only have two children". Although in some rural area like hight moutain those family here still often have about three to five children. I wondered how can your country's population become elder and elder? Has the president had any strategy to fix that yet?

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