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Please check grammer in my writing My major is Metallurgy. The Metallurgy is about metals. Especially I focus on a Iron. In Metallurgy, there are many part of study, for example, you can learn how materials are fractured or what charater is changed in various temperature (or pressure, conditions) or ect. I think that you may look it so boring and you may never use it in all your life-time. But Metals exist all around you and they were used by you before you know. The say that I want to talk to you about( can I use "What I want to talk to you about"?) is not only their usefulness but they are interesting when you learn Metallurgy. Although now I am weak-learned man, but I have enough interest about it and full-filled passion, so I have confidence about it Please check grammer and non-smooth sentence. T.T

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Please check grammer in my writing

My major is metallurgy.
Metallurgy is about metals.
I especially focus on Iron.
In metallurgy, there are many parts of study, for example, you can learn how materials are fractured or
what character is changed in various temperature or pressure conditions, etc.
I think that you may look at it as being so boring and may think you have never use it at all in your life-time.
But, metals exist all around you and they were used by you before you knew about them.
What I want to talk to you about is not only their usefulness but that they are interesting when you learn metallurgy.
Although for now I am a weak man at learning, I have enough interest about it to make it a full-filled passion,
so I have confidence knowing about it

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