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1 min oral presentation (propaganda poster) Today I'm going to describe this North Korean propaganda poster. This poster was released by the Korean Central News Agency on August the fifth. This day is particularly important in Korea because it is 광복절, "The day the light returned", referring to the National Liberation Day. I'm going to start describing this poster by mentioning the huge North Korean flag. Since it is a propaganda poster, it is important to bring a national symbol occupying one third of the whole poster. But this is not the only important element of the poster. As you can see, there is a big intercontinental missile in front of the flag, and there are even more missiles beside it. Their red color can remind us of the violence of those nuclear engine. These missiles are also pointing at a very important American symbol : the Capitol Building, represented as being destroyed by the North Korean powerful artillery. The American flag is also represented as being ripped by the missiles, and we can even read some destruction onomatopoeia in Korean at the bottom of the poster. The last important element of the poster is the headline "조선의 대답", meaning "Our answer". This one refers to the North Korean answer to the UN sanctions against the country. By showing the destruction of an American symbol by their nuclear power, North Korea offers a poignant propaganda poster, answering to the sanctions the country is being confronted to.

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1 min oral presentation (propaganda poster)

Today I'm going to describe this North Korean propaganda poster.

This poster was released by the Korean Central News Agency on August the fifth. This day is particularly important in Korea because it is 광복절, "The day the light returned", referring to the National Liberation Day.

I'm going to start describing this poster by mentioning the huge North Korean flag. Since it is a propaganda poster, it is important to use a national symbol occupying one third of the whole poster.
But this is not the only important element of the poster. As you can see, there is a big intercontinental missile in front of the flag, and there are even more missiles near* it. The color red, used here,  reminds us of the violence of those nuclear engines.
These missiles are also pointing at a very important American symbol : the Capitol Building, represented as being destroyed by the North Korean powerful artillery. The American flag is also represented as being ripped by the missiles, and we can even read some onomatopoeias representing destruction in Korean at the bottom of the poster.
The last important element of the poster is the headline "조선의 대답", meaning "Our answer". This one refers to the North Korean answer to the UN sanctions against the country.

By showing the destruction of an American symbol by their nuclear power, North Korea offers a poignant propaganda poster, answering to the sanctions the country is being confronted to.

*Ce n'est pas vraiment à côté du missile, donc "près de"...

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Je suis absolument époustouflée par votre niveau d'anglais ! Travail absolument impressionnant ! Continuez sur cette voie !

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1 min oral presentation (propaganda poster)

Today I'm going to describe this North Korean propaganda poster.

This poster was released by the Korean Central News Agency on August the fifth. This day is particularly important in Korea because it is 광복절, "The day the light returned", referring to the National Liberation Day.

I'm going to start describing/will start the description of  this poster by mentioning the huge North Korean flag. Since it is a propaganda poster, it is important to bring/introduce a national symbol occupying at least one third of the whole poster.
But/However this is not the only important element of the poster. As you can see, there is a big intercontinental missile in front of the flag, and there are even more missiles beside it. Their red color (probably signifies the red of the flag!) can remind us of the violence of those nuclear engines of destruction.
These missiles are also pointing at a very important American symbol : the Capitol Building, represented as being destroyed by the North Korean powerful artillery. The American flag is also represented as being ripped by the missiles, and we can even read some destruction onomatopoeia in Korean at the bottom of the poster.
The last important element of the poster is the headline "조선의 대답", meaning "Our answer". This one refers to the North Korean answer to the UN sanctions against the country.

By showing the destruction of an American symbol using by (to avoid the double 'by') their nuclear power, North Korea offers a poignant/compelling propaganda poster, answering responding/in response to the sanctions confronting the country is being confronted with to. (often preferable to use active form rather than passive)

Excellent, most of my suggestions are alternatives, not corrections

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Who said "Our answer" refers to the UN sanctions or that North Korea plans to bomb the USA because of sanctions rather than against physical military aggression from the USA?

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