Stone statues at the door of the stadium.
Olympic Games started in Greece two thousand years ago. Greece people loved playing and competing each other. Every four years all the Greece islands came to Olympia to learn who the best athlete of all them was. But if someone made trap and he tried to win bribing their opponents , referees imposed a seriuous ban and they had to paid a statue with his own name at the coming of Stadium. It was really hard because everybody could read or recognize his name like a cheater. Currently archaeologist continue finding some statues in Olympia.
Since them, have passed many years, but currently some famous football players in Spain, have decided forget the rules and didn’t paid their tax every year. They could come to the prison and they have been to pay millions of Euros. Some of them are idols and teenagers around the World watch them like the most important people. Unfortunately no one ask them a statue to place at the door of the stadium.
Finally I hope people grows up and understands there are many things more important than watching millionaires players fitting behind a ball every week. Probably many of them need to forget their own problems and dreaming some dull wish. Until them we only can wait.
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Stone statues at the door of the stadium.(If this is the title, capitalize the first letter of all words except at, the, of, the)
Since then, have passed many years have passed, but currently some famous football players in Spain,= have decided to forget the rules and didn’t paid pay their taxes every year. They could come go to the prison and they have been to pay millions of Euros. Some of them are idols and teenagers around the World watch them like they are the most very important people. Unfortunately no one asks them to pay for a statue to place at the door of the stadium.
Finally I hope people grows up and understands that there are many things more important than watching millionaires players fitting (standing?)behind a ball every week. Probably many of them need to forget their own problems and dreaming some dull wish(not sure what you are trying to say with 'dreaming some dull wish). Until then we only can wait.
Note: You have used both him and their to refer to the athletes. I've changed them to 'their' for consistency.
Good job! I think we often let our celebrities get away with more than ordinary people!
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