Diary 16.08.2017 An accident power cut
It occurred at last early evening, and at the moment I was doing a searching on the internet, then my screen just backs out suddenly. First I thought I kicked the computer case accidentally and that caused it to shut down right away. But the electronic fans also stopped, then I moved my eyes on the power extension cord to see if the power signal lighting switcher was still on or off. Apparently, it was off.
I was so surprised by this power cut because it hadn't happened for a long time to my home. As so I was a bit worried about something bad just happened which caused this shortage to the power supply like a fire incident or a severe disaster at some vital facilities or important and huge factories.
Not sooner or later it came back normal, the power came back eventually. However, I just laid down the garage door in a manual way by keeping pulling the chain for minutes.
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Diary 16.08.2017 An accidental power cut
It occurred at last early yesterday evening, and at the momen . I was doing a searching on the internet, then my screen just blacks out suddenly. First I thought I kicked the computer case accidentally and that caused it to shut down right away. But the electronic fans had also stopped. Then I moved my eyes to the power extension cord to see if the power signal lighting switcher was still on or off. Apparently, it was off.I was so surprised by this power cut because it hadn't happened for a long time to my home. So I was a bit worried that something bad just happened which caused this shortage to the power supply like a fire incident or a severe disaster at some vital facility or important and huge factories.
It soon came back to normal[OR] The power came back eventually. However, I had just pulled down the garage door by keeping pulling on the chain for minutes.
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