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Diary 16.08.2017 An accident power cut It occurred at last early evening, and at the moment I was doing a searching on the internet, then my screen just backs out suddenly. First I thought I kicked the computer case accidentally and that caused it to shut down right away. But the electronic fans also stopped, then I moved my eyes on the power extension cord to see if the power signal lighting switcher was still on or off. Apparently, it was off. I was so surprised by this power cut because it hadn't happened for a long time to my home. As so I was a bit worried about something bad just happened which caused this shortage to the power supply like a fire incident or a severe disaster at some vital facilities or important and huge factories. Not sooner or later it came back normal, the power came back eventually. However, I just laid down the garage door in a manual way by keeping pulling the chain for minutes.

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Diary 16.08.2017 An accidental power cut

It occurred at last early yesterday evening, and at the momen . I was doing a searching on the internet, then my screen just blacks out suddenly. First I thought I kicked the computer case accidentally and that caused it to shut down right away. But the electronic fans had also stopped. Then I moved my eyes to the power extension cord to see if the power signal lighting switcher was still on or off. Apparently, it was off.

I was so surprised by this power cut because it hadn't happened for a long time to my home. So I was a bit worried that something bad just happened which caused this shortage to the power supply like a fire incident or a severe disaster at some vital facility or important and huge factories.

It soon came back to normal[OR] The power came back eventually. However, I had just pulled down the garage door by keeping pulling on the chain for minutes.


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