Corrections · 3
Chart practice
The bar chart indicates the changes in the reason for adults to study, while the pie chart compares the percentage of who should share the costs of each course.Those who want to study for interest and gain qualifications accounted for the highest proportion, at around 40%, while studying to help with a current job, improve promotion prospects, and for the enjoyment of studying only stood at 20%, which was half the former. There were less people who were studying to change jobs and meet people, at 12% compared with 9%.
Turning to who should responsible for the cost of courses, only a quarter of people believe that it should be paid for by the taxpayers, whereas most people believe that this should be paid for by individuals and employers, which accounted for 40% and 35% respectively.
Overall, the majority of people were going to study because they had an interest in a certain subject and wanted to acquire qualifications. While the least common reasons were to change jobs and meet people. In addition, people had widely different attitudes on who pays for the courses, it is clear that more people think that the individual should pay rather than the taxpayer.
Hello Chang,
There are some good parts of this description but also several point which needed correction. It would help if you can provide a copy of the question as well!
The layout was quite reasonable but I think your second paragraph was much better as a summary paragraph. Please take care when using multiple phrases in a sentence, usually they need to be the same form (parallel)
Hope this helps
Bob
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
