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The second child policy In the last century , the government carrid out the policy of Family plan, which helped to slow the increasing nomber of population. now the policy has changed,every Family can have one more child, which is great news for most of Family. Because Chinese traditional view consider that the more children, the better. according to the relevant research, many young couples refused the second child policy, due to they will face with great pressure if raising one more child. To raise one child need lots of money , providing better education for him is indispensable。What 's more, the parents need to buy a comfortable house , all of these are a great burden. they raise tow children, which means that they have to work much harder, for living more comfortable, the young parents still choose to raise one kid , so they could have more time and money to enjoy beautiful life.

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The second child policy

In the last century , the government carried out the policy of Family Plan, which helped to slow the increasing nomber number of population people. Now the policy has changed. Every family can have one more child, which is great news for most of Family families because Chinese traditional views consider that the more children, the better. According to the relevant research, many young couples refused the second child policy, due to because they will face with greater pressure if raising one more child. To raise one child needs lots of money and providing better education for him is indispensable。What 's more, the parents need to buy a comfortable house. All of these are great burdens. They raise tow two children, which means that they have to work much harder for living to live more comfortable comfortably. The young parents still choose to raise one kid so they could have more time and money to enjoy a beautiful life.

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Hi Yang! You clearly have good vocabulary and express yourself well in English. You also use correct verb tenses, for the most part. The biggest issues I see in this correction is spelling and when to end and begin sentences. Review sentence structure to identify when it is good to use a period ( . ) or continue a sentence. Additionally, work on how to use nouns that describe groups of people (families, people, etc.) correctly. Best wishes! -Shelley

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[emoji]‍[emoji]‍[emoji]‍[emoji] Dear Yang, A strong population policy is the need of our times, especially in this Asia region where just we two countries hold around half of the world population. Our problem (In India) is absence of sense of duty in people about the nation, in the matter of population, your problem (China's) is that a big ratio of population is rapidly growing old. So, two-child policy is our weakness in controlling our population and your compulsion in order to remake China young. We enjoy our weakness, you do your compulsion. Good article friend.☑️

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