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Global Peace Global Peace In every place in the world, there is good, and there is evil. Therefore young people should be taught how to choose the good side. Young people should know that humanity and all religions are against thoughts of violence, killing and wars. Everyone deserves to live in peace and happiness. All people have to work together to build strong amicable relationships, dependent on mutual respect, understanding and love between people of different nations, cultures, races and religions. People have to accept each other and adapt their thoughts towards tolerance and forgiveness. They should work against hatred, selfishness and violence. Finally, I believe humanity is faced with many difficult challenges, but nothing is impossible; if good people work together, they will certainly achieve global peace.

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Global Peace

Global Peace
In every place in the world, there is good, and there is evil. Therefore young people should be taught how to choose the good side. Young people should know that humanity and all religions are against thoughts of violence, killing, and wars. Everyone deserves to live in peace and happiness.


All people have to work together to build strong amicable relationships, dependent on mutual respect, understandingand love between people of different nations, cultures, races and religions.


People have to accept each other and adapt their thoughts towards tolerance and forgiveness. They should work against hatred, selfishness and violence.
Finally, I believe humanity is faced with many difficult challenges, but nothing is impossible; if good people work together, they will certainly achieve global peace.


Very few mistakes Taily, a great entry.

Kind regards,

Nicholas

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In every place in the world, there is good and there is evil. Therefore, young people should be taught how to choose the good side.

[Everything else looks good to me. - Dave]

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Thank you Mr. Gary
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Very good, Taily!

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