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it is the first time I am trying to make an essay for practice. please correct me . tks in advance. Nowadays, along with the rising women right around the world, an increasing number of women are likely to attend to college to further their studying. Besides, some assert that universities should receive an identical number of male and female students in each subject. Personally, I totally disagree with this opinion for a couple of reasons. To begin with, the population of men and women are different in many countries and areas. In China, the number of men is about 20 million more than that of women, almost equal to the population of Australia, which means there are fewer female students than the number of the male.Therefore, Universities in China should reserve more seats for the male students rather than female. Secondly, boys and girls have different hobbies. Although, there are exceptions, generally, boys are more likely to be interested in science and girls in the opposite position are more likely to be interested in art. For example, in our computer science and technology faculty, the number of boys are four times than that of girls. So, our university should reserve more seats for boys in our faculty. Lastly, men and women have different natures which divide them to different fields naturally. Men are strong and rough while women are slender and tender which makes women be more acceptable by preschool kids. That is the reason why there is more women teacher in kindergarten than men teacher. In conclusion, universities should decide the number of the different genders of students carefully for each single subject based on multi factors, such as the local population and the different natures of men and women.

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Nowadays, along with the rising of women's rights around the world, an increasing number of women are likely to attend to college to further their studying. Besides, some assert that universities should receive an identical number of male and female students in each subject. Personally, I totally disagree with this opinion for a couple of reasons.


To begin with, the population of men and women are different in many countries and areas. In China, the number of men is about 20 million more than that of women, almost equal to the population of Australia, which means there are fewer female students than the number of the male.Therefore, Universities in China should reserve more seats for the male students rather than female.

Secondly, boys and girls have different hobbies. Although there are exceptions, generally, boys are more likely to be interested in science and girls on the other hand are more likely to be interested in art. For example, in our computer science and technology faculty, the number of boys are four times the girls. So, our university should reserve more seats for boys in our faculty.

Lastly, men and women have different natures which divide them to different fields naturally. Men are strong and rough while women are slender and tender which makes women be more acceptable by preschool kids. That is the reason why there are more women teachers in kindergarten than men teachers.

In conclusion, universities should decide the number of the different genders of students carefully for each single subject based on multi factors, such as the local population and the different natures of men and women.

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