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Cindy When Cindy woke up this morning she was very excited because she didn't had to go to college and sit throught class with her teacher talking non stop for four hours. Since she's a very desorganized girl, her room was a mess, so she decided to clean it thinking ''It's going to be so fast and easy, i don't think that everything is so out of place'' Oh, she was so wrong... all the clothes that was supposed to be in her closet was tossed over her chair, desk and floor. Besides that, there was a lot of papers spread around her room and the thing that called her attention, was that her floor was covered with coins, so at least she gained some change. By the time she got everything back to where was supposed to be, she was starving and decided to give herself a treat and eat out with the money she found while cleaning, and that almost made up for all the hard work, that probably will be happening again in a few weeks.

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Cindy

When Cindy woke up this morning she was very excited because she didn't have to go to college and sit through class with her teacher talking non-stop for four hours. As a very disorganized girl, her room was a mess, so she decided to clean it thinking, "It's going to be so fast and easy, I don't think that everything is that out of place'' Oh, she was so wrong... all the clothes that were supposed to be in her closet were tossed over her chair, desk and floor. Besides that, there were a lot of papers spread around her room and the thing that called her attention was that her floor was covered with coins, so at least she found some change. By the time she got everything back to where was supposed to be, she was starving and decided to treat herself and eat out with the money she found while cleaning, and that almost made up for all the hard work, that will probably be needed again in a few weeks.


*were instead of was when the subjects are plural: the father was cleaning since the clothes were on the floor.

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Cindy

When Cindy woke up this morning she was very excited because she didn't had  have to go to college and sit throught through class with her teacher talking non stop for four hours. Since she's a very desorganized  disorganized girl, her room was a mess, so she decided to clean it thinking ''It's going to be so fast and easy, i I don't think that everything is so out of place'' Oh, she was so wrong... all the clothes that was where supposed to be in her closet was where tossed over her chair, desk and floor. Besides that, there was a lot of papers spread around her room and the thing that called her attention, was that her floor was covered with coins, so at least she gained some change. By the time she got everything back to where  it  was supposed to be, she was starving and decided to give herself a treat and eat out with the money she found while cleaning, and that almost made up for all the hard work, that probably will be happening again in a few weeks.

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