things I've done I was in out of city for this there days because I was camping. I did with my friend who is American and we had so much fun. We went to a river and we hanged out with floating which

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things I've done I was in out of city for this there days because I was camping. I did with my friend who is American and we had so much fun. We went to a river and we hanged out with floating which can use both of us first day. After that, we went to bar and a place we stay is kind of a vacation place for a gay people so I saw a lot of gay people there. And we had great California meal this night. On a next day, we go up more north California and we slept surround by a forest. it was quiet and and such a nice place but, it was much foggy so we just changed the place to stay on the next day. We found a place which is near by creek and we hanged out there and slept and we just went back to San Francisco on the next day. She made all of meals and I was surprised at her meals every single time because a taste was amazing and she always change the meal and she never made same meal. In this camping, I like California more than before. I had so much fun time.

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things I've done

I was in out of city for this there days because I was camping.
I did with my friend who is American and we had so much fun.
We went to a river and we hanged out with floating which can use both of us first day.
After that, we went to bar and a place we stay is kind of a vacation place for a gay people so
I saw a lot of gay people there.
And we had great California meal this night.
On a next day, we go up more north California and we slept surround by a forest.
it was quiet and and such a nice place but, it was much foggy so we just changed the place to stay on the next day.
We found a place which is near by creek and we hanged out there and slept and we just went back to San Francisco on the next day.
She made all of meals and I was surprised at her meals every single time because a taste was amazing and she always change the meal and she never made same meal.
In this camping, I like California more than before. I had so much fun time.

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Things I've done

I was out of the city for three days camping. I went with my American friend and we had so much fun. On the first day, we hung out at a river on a floatie that fits the two of us. After that, we went to a bar and the place we were staying was kind of a popular vacation destination for gay people, so I saw a lot of gay people there. We ate a really great California-style meal that night.

The next day, we traveled more north in California, and we slept surrounded by forest. It was quiet and such a nice place, but it was so foggy, so we ended up staying somewhere else the next day. We found a place near a creek and we hung out there. After we slept, we just went back to San Francisco the next day.

My friend cooked all of our meals and I was surprised every time I tasted them. They were amazing and she made something new every single time. This camping trip made me like California even more. I had such a fun time.

Sounds like a lot of fun! Great writing ^^

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