Moved into a new house!
I moved into a new house about a month ago.
We didn't hire movers, so moving was a little hard, but my husband borrowed a truck from his acquaintance, that helped us a lot.
The house has a small yard so that my daughter can play there. I love it. She and I blew bubbles yesterday, too.
We've enjoyed living in this house.
I couldn't do English learning because of this moving, but I'm going to start it again!
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Moved into a new house!
I moved into a new house about a month ago.We didn't hire movers, so moving was a little hard. However,my husband borrowed a truck from his acquaintance; that helped us a lot. This sentence is a little too long and had too many conjunctions( joining words). Thus, I separated them and changed but to however; this is only because I was taught you shouldn't start a sentence with but. However, but would still be acceptable.
The house has a small yard so that my daughter can play there. I love it. She and I blew bubbles yesterday, too. The comma is not necessary here.
We've enjoyed We enjoy living in this house. Basically, what you are saying is, we have enjoyed living in this house, like it has happened already, I used we enjoy because it is happening now(present)
I couldn't do English learning because of this moving move, but I'm going to start it again!
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Moved into a new house!
I moved into a new house about a month ago.We didn't hire movers, so moving was a little hard, but my husband borrowed a truck from his acquaintance, that helped us a lot (Because this is such a long sentence a native speaker might say, "borrowed a truck from his acquaintance AND that helped us a lot." Or "borrowed a truck from his acquaintance WHICH helped us a lot.")
The house has a small yard so that my daughter can play there. I love it. She and I blew bubbles yesterday, too.
We've enjoyed living in this house.
I couldn't do English learning because of this moving (due to moving, or because of this move), but I'm going to start it again!
Your English is in GREAT shape! I've highlighted words which are optional. They are not wrong, but you can lighten your sentence and sound more like a native speaker by dropping them. Congratulations on your new house!
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Really nice text. I hope that you can continue your studies on English language.
I'm back to the Japanese course and I'm very happy with it.
Enjoy your new house :)
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This was well written
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