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the ghost I had seen some film about ghosts in the past year. The most of them were very terrible. But the movie, name’s "ghost", was my favorite. The film was about a story: a young bank clerk Sam deeply loved his fiancee Molly. One night, when they returned from the theatre, they was robbed. Sam was shot dead in the struggle, and the murderer was Sam’s friend. Sam and Molly loved so deeply that He wasn’t willing to leave her. The soul of Sam had always protected Molly. At last, the murderer deserved punishment. Sam said goodbye to Molly and went to heaven. This is a touching story. From it, I believe that the bereavement of mine still stays with me. Although we can't communicate, but we always miss each other, and will remember each other forever.

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I had seen watched some films about ghosts in the past year. The most of them were very terrible. But the movie, name’s  called "ghost", was my favorite. The film was about a story: of a young bank clerk Sam who deeply loved his fiancee Molly. One night, when they returned from the theatre , theater they was were robbed. Sam was shot dead in the struggle, and .the murderer was Sam’s friend. Sam and Molly loved Molly so deeply that He he wasn’t willing to leave her. The soul of Sam Sam's soul had always protected Molly. At last, the murderer deserved  got the punishment he deserved. Sam said goodbye to Molly and went to heaven. This is a touching story. From it I believe that the bereavement of mine still one stays with them me. Although we can't communicate, but we always miss each other, and will remember each other forever.

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