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My Neighbor My neighbor was a strange person. Whenever I met her in the neighbourhood, I would say hello to her. Meanwhile, she always nodded but never spoke anything. I used to think maybe she was a deaf mute. But made me surprised, on one morning, she suddenly said "good morning" to me. I was so curious about it, so I asked her why she didn't open her mouth in the past. She told me that she used to have a vocal cord polyp. It was so difficult to make a sound. Last month, she had received the operation. After that, she could speak again. It was too happy for her.

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My Neighbor

My neighbor was a strange person. Whenever I met her in the neighbourhood, I would say hello to her. Meanwhile, she always nodded but never spoke said anything. I used to think that maybe she was a deaf mute. But made me i was surprised, on one morning, when she suddenly said "good morning" to me. I was so curious about it, so that I asked her why she didn't open her mouth say anything in the past. She told me that she used to have a vocal cord polyp. It was so difficult to make a sound. Last month, she had received got the operation done. and After that, she could speak again. It I was too happy for her.

I highlighted the mistakes in yellow. The corrections i made are in green. Hope this helps! :) 

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My Neighbor

My neighbor was a strange person. Whenever I met her in the neighbourhood, I would say hello to her. Meanwhile, she always nodded but never spoke anything. I used to think maybe she was a deaf mute. But it surprised one morning, she suddenly said "good morning" to me. I was so curious about it, so I asked her why she didn't open her mouth in the past. She told me that she used to have a vocal cord polyp. It was so difficult to make a sound. Last month, she had received the operation. After that, she could speak again. It was very happy for her.


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Hi Gyzyli! Great job here! Almost no corrections as you can see :) I just edited some sentences to lessen the verbs. Be careful with some prepositions too.

Hope this helps!

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