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Elections in Kenya from LeMonde Who are presidential cnadidates ? There are eight in the presidential race. But only two really count / are important : Uhuru Kenyatta 55 years, the outgoing president that aspires to an second mandate. And Raila Odinga, 72 years, the leader of opposition that leads his fourth presidential candidacy. The two mans know each other and they had faced already in 2003. They are the successors of two dynasties structuring the political Kenyan since independence. Theirs fathers , Jomo Kenyatta et Oginga Odinga , were respectively the first president and vice-president of Kenya

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Elections in Kenya from LeMonde

Who are presidential the candidates ?
There are eight in the presidential race. But only two really count / are important: Uhuru Kenyatta, 55 years, the outgoing president that who aspires to an have a second mandate.* And Raila Odinga, 72 years, the leader of opposition that who** leads his fourth presidential candidacy.
The two mans men know each other and they had already faced already each other in 2003. They are the successors of two dynasties structuring*** the political Kenyan politics since its independence.
Theirs fathers, Jomo Kenyatta et Oginga Odinga , were, respectively, the first president and vice-president of Kenya.


*"Mandate" is a French way of phrasing. In English, "mandat" is a "term (of office)", so "...president who is seeking a second term" would be a more natural phrasing here.

**"Who refers to people", "that" refers to things.

***Better phrasing: "...of two dynasties that have shaped Kenyan politics..."


General note: In English, we don't have a space between the last letter of a word and the punctuation mark that follows.

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Elections in Kenya from LeMonde

Who are the presidential candidates ?
There are eight (of them) in the presidential race. But only two really count / are important. The first is  : Uhuru Kenyatta 55 years old, and the outgoing president that who aspires to an (achieve a) second mandate. The second is And Raila Odinga, 72 years old, the leader of opposition that who is leading his fourth presidential candidacy.
The two mans men know each other and they had previously faced (off) already in 2003. They are the successors of two dynasties structuring the political life of Kenyan since independence.
Theirs fathers , Jomo Kenyatta et Oginga Odinga , were respectively the first president and vice-president of Kenya


Really good!!!

What do the candidates believe in? What are their policies?

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